Common Mistake #1
Avoid "he says" quote introductions.
This mistake is found on the blog "Laughapalooza".
http://laughapalooza22.blogspot.com/
Common Mistake #2
Don't use a long quotation as the subject of a sentence.
This mistake can be found on the blog "J-Momma".
http://j-momma.blogspot.com/
Common Mistake #4
When discussing the effects of a passage, avoid referring to the way it affects "the reader" or "the audience".
This mistake can be seen on the blog "Keep It Classy".
http://estella-havisham.blogspot.com/
Common Mistake #6
Avoid the verbs "use" and "shows"
This common mistake can be seen on "The Blog of Epic Proportions"
http://kaylaepicblogger.blogspot.com/
The best close reading of the practice excerpts from class was on "The World Is Ours" blog.
http://star-bellysneetch.blogspot.com/
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